11 Comments
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Dan Violette's avatar

Well written, Brent; nice gotcha at the end.

Dave's avatar

Your story was Farouking brilliant!

Missy's avatar

My favorite story so far!

Claire Polders's avatar

Loved reading this! And I know the feeling so well, wanting to trust and not wanting to be conned. More often than not, trusting was the right choice.

Uma Krishnaswami's avatar

The best kind of travel story—characters, narrative tension, a setting with texture and color, plot twists—and a happy ending! Thanks, you two.

R. S. Hampton, Thriller Author's avatar

I am very glad it turned out well.

Milo's avatar

Ah! That wasn't the turn I expected haha

Thanks for sharing the story, that was heartwarming ☺️

DenizB33's avatar

Aww, that's awesome! I wish I could go stay there! ❤️

Ellen's avatar

Love your stories!!

JJ's avatar

Great story! And an impressively great find of a apartment!

James Frank's avatar

Loved this story.